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maikn, September 4th, 2011, 10:34 pm ( Reply )

Yay! - This is the end of Chapter 1 ! :-) I hope you enjoyed it.... I would love suggestions and critiques, but maybe it's still too early in the story?

I think the next update'll be late. I have yet to storyboard the pages ahemfailahem

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maikn, September 5th, 2011, 9:17 pm ( Reply )

- @ayanechan: Ah I'm really glad the story is okay so far! I was worried since I get comments on my art, but not the story <:-)

@thryn: ahhhh thank you thrn you are the sweetest <333 !!

@Koffi: Hehe thank you so very much! There will be more to come, I promise! :-)

maikn, September 10th, 2011, 9:56 pm ( Reply )

- @teurastaa Ahh I'm glad it isn't boring you hahaaa! I'm hoping I can self-publish it in the future!

@nawafiai Yees! I'm surprised you notice, since it's all kind of small and hard to see.

@fiddles thank you so much! Ahhh I'm so relieved that the pacing is okay! I was really worried that it was kind of choppy!

@Diseasedface omigosh thank you so much for your lovely comment! It means so much to me! Especially when you take your precious time to send me such kind words! I'm soso happy you're enjoying it so far :-) And yup, I'm sure the treasure parlour is a delightful place...though I'm not sure what exactly would be kept there !

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omigosh! Your drawings are amazing, your story is interesting i can't wait to see more! I don't think there is anything bad atm but wait till further into the story like you suggested to ask people to critique :)

posted by ayanechan on September 5th, 2011, 6:41 am





 
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dflhbsfsdfjhhbsdflhhsbdsdf AHHHH I CANT WAIT THIS STORYYYY SOBBB dfslbflhdsfbfds this is the best

posted by thryn on September 5th, 2011, 12:28 pm



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Oh no i was afraid of this, i just found your comic and i'm loving it hoping it would never end :T, please keep it up

posted by Koffi (Guest) on September 5th, 2011, 4:26 pm



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oooh wow!!! so unexpected and cool! I'm really loving this adventure! You should publish this as a children's book series! seriously.

posted by teurastaa on September 6th, 2011, 4:17 pm





 
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8D

posted by MomotheGreat on September 7th, 2011, 7:47 pm



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:O
And there's a black bird on the compass!

haha
I just noticed: "To the tearoom" she should go there :D

posted by nawafiai on September 8th, 2011, 9:12 am





 
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ooooohhh!! i am so looking forward to this. /*Q*)/ oohh treasure oohh~
And really there isn't anything i could possible critique! The story is soo interesting & cool, the flow of the panels are really really good with good pace and everything, i love the colors, and as you should know your art is absolutely amazingg! Just keep up the good work <333 ajgsfkjlasfhkl <333

posted by fiddles on September 8th, 2011, 8:37 pm





 
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This entire comic! what a delightfully bright and childish(in all the best child like ways. wonderment! simplicity and purities!) STORY AND STYLE YOU HAVE PUT INTO THIS COMIC AND TALE! its just..AHhhhh FANTASTICccccccccc. it oozing colour and LIFE! never for a moment do i doubt Vivi's perspective! ahhhhhhhh DIVINE! every page makes me want to print and frame somewhere. ahhh. Continue the breathtaking work!

The treasure parlour sounds like a delightful place !

posted by Diseasedface on September 10th, 2011, 4:05 pm



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AAAAAARHHH WHY DIDN'T I CHECK THIS OUT SOONER??? It's so amazing!! The colors, the characters, the story so far! Damn, Can't wait for more!!!!!

posted by polkadots on September 12th, 2011, 9:37 am



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I repeat, I would kill for a house like that.

posted by December on November 14th, 2012, 12:38 am



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